Friday, November 21, 2008
FINALLY!!! A TITLE!!!
I finally have a title for my latest poem.. And I would like to thank my lil' sis Paula for helping me out with the title.. And we have come up with I Need Answers.. Please.. Enjoy the poem!!
Thursday, November 20, 2008
Title help
As you noticed the last poem that I put up doesn't have a title yet.. I can't seem to find a good title for it.. If anybody can help me that would be awesome.. Hope to hear suggestions soon.. And thanks..
I Need Answers
Why do good things
Just never last?
I’m sure most of you are saying
That’s not true at all
Good things do last
So why hasn’t it for me?
Do I just have really bad luck?
Or is it just not meant to be
Cause I just can never explain it
It has happened to many times before
There just has to be an explanation
Or maybe it is just one of those things
That you can never explain
I just need answers fast
The sooner the better
Cause this just can’t keep happening
Or its just gonna drive me crazy
I just want to be one of those people
That can say yes, it is true
Good things do last
And when that time comes
I can finally be at peace
With the life that I have
Just never last?
I’m sure most of you are saying
That’s not true at all
Good things do last
So why hasn’t it for me?
Do I just have really bad luck?
Or is it just not meant to be
Cause I just can never explain it
It has happened to many times before
There just has to be an explanation
Or maybe it is just one of those things
That you can never explain
I just need answers fast
The sooner the better
Cause this just can’t keep happening
Or its just gonna drive me crazy
I just want to be one of those people
That can say yes, it is true
Good things do last
And when that time comes
I can finally be at peace
With the life that I have
Sounds of Heaven
I sit on the beautiful green grass
Just listening to the beautiful sounds around me
As I start to stare into space
All the sounds around me seem to grow louder
I hear the Orange-Crowned Warblers chirping away
I have never heard birds sound this beautifully
In the distance I hear beautiful singing like I never heard before
It sounded like Enya and Charlotte Church singing a duet
Their amazing voices mixing together in beautiful harmony
As I began to close my eyes
I heard the most beautiful voice
It sounded like a million angels singing a beautiful chorus
It gave me a good warm feeling inside
Made me feel in peace with everything that was going on
It called out my name and it brought a smile to my face
I opened my eyes to see where that voice was coming from
The funny thing is when I opened them
I wasn’t sitting on grassy meadow
I was sitting in a dinner table facing my beautiful girlfriend
She says to me “Baby why are you smiling?”
I say to her with the biggest smile on my face, “Oh nothing.”
Just listening to the beautiful sounds around me
As I start to stare into space
All the sounds around me seem to grow louder
I hear the Orange-Crowned Warblers chirping away
I have never heard birds sound this beautifully
In the distance I hear beautiful singing like I never heard before
It sounded like Enya and Charlotte Church singing a duet
Their amazing voices mixing together in beautiful harmony
As I began to close my eyes
I heard the most beautiful voice
It sounded like a million angels singing a beautiful chorus
It gave me a good warm feeling inside
Made me feel in peace with everything that was going on
It called out my name and it brought a smile to my face
I opened my eyes to see where that voice was coming from
The funny thing is when I opened them
I wasn’t sitting on grassy meadow
I was sitting in a dinner table facing my beautiful girlfriend
She says to me “Baby why are you smiling?”
I say to her with the biggest smile on my face, “Oh nothing.”
The Perfect Feeling
I feel a cool breeze in the air
I feel the sun’s warmth all over my skin
I hear the birds happily singing their song
I lean my head back to feel the sun on my face
Letting myself relax as I enjoy this beautiful feeling
I laid down and ran my hands through the grass
I never felt grass this soft before
I never felt this way before either
This is an amazing feeling
It feels like all my problems have gone away
My heart is beating in a slow and peaceful pace
I feel very calm and very relaxed
I feel like nothing will ever go wrong again
Little did I know a huge smile
Was forming across my face
Then in the distance I hear a voice
It’s the most beautiful voice I have ever heard
It says “Hello?” as her voice echoes through the air
As I sat up, her voice gets louder and louder
For some reason her voice made my heart beat faster
I opened my eyes to try and find her in this beautiful place
But when I opened my eyes, I didn’t see a beautiful meadow
I was sitting in my office with my cell phone in my ear
I hear her voice again saying “Hello? You there?”
I replied back to her “Yes baby, I’m here”
She answers me “Are you okay?”
With a big smile in my face I tell her “Yeah! Everything is perfect”
I feel the sun’s warmth all over my skin
I hear the birds happily singing their song
I lean my head back to feel the sun on my face
Letting myself relax as I enjoy this beautiful feeling
I laid down and ran my hands through the grass
I never felt grass this soft before
I never felt this way before either
This is an amazing feeling
It feels like all my problems have gone away
My heart is beating in a slow and peaceful pace
I feel very calm and very relaxed
I feel like nothing will ever go wrong again
Little did I know a huge smile
Was forming across my face
Then in the distance I hear a voice
It’s the most beautiful voice I have ever heard
It says “Hello?” as her voice echoes through the air
As I sat up, her voice gets louder and louder
For some reason her voice made my heart beat faster
I opened my eyes to try and find her in this beautiful place
But when I opened my eyes, I didn’t see a beautiful meadow
I was sitting in my office with my cell phone in my ear
I hear her voice again saying “Hello? You there?”
I replied back to her “Yes baby, I’m here”
She answers me “Are you okay?”
With a big smile in my face I tell her “Yeah! Everything is perfect”
The Perfect Smile
The darkness is all around me
I keep on running and running
Every breath seems like my last
I just want to get away from here
Away from all this darkness
So I continue to run, a little faster this time
I fall forward, tripping on a small stone
I hit the floor hard, feeling the pain
But I get up quickly, and continued to run
Then suddenly, a bright white light stopped me
It blinded my eyes so I couldn’t see
I tried to focus my eyes as much as I can
To try and see what was causing that light
Just then things started to clear up
Beyond the white light was a beautiful sight
There was this girl standing there
She was wearing pink skinnies and a purple hoodie
Her smile casting that beautiful white light
I start to look around me noticing all the darkness
Was being replaced by the beautiful whiteness
Then turning into this gorgeous garden
With bright green grass and beautiful colored flowers
Looking up at the sky I saw this beautiful sun
With it’s rays shining down on me, feeling its warmth
I look back at that beautiful girl standing in front of me
Her infectious smile also sends warmth through my body
Giving me this good and uplifting feeling I never felt before
I start to walk towards the girl with the beautiful smile
As I walk closer to her, her smile seems to brighten up
I feel my own smile growing on my face as I got closer
As I stand there and stare at her beautiful smile
I knew this was a beginning of something great
I keep on running and running
Every breath seems like my last
I just want to get away from here
Away from all this darkness
So I continue to run, a little faster this time
I fall forward, tripping on a small stone
I hit the floor hard, feeling the pain
But I get up quickly, and continued to run
Then suddenly, a bright white light stopped me
It blinded my eyes so I couldn’t see
I tried to focus my eyes as much as I can
To try and see what was causing that light
Just then things started to clear up
Beyond the white light was a beautiful sight
There was this girl standing there
She was wearing pink skinnies and a purple hoodie
Her smile casting that beautiful white light
I start to look around me noticing all the darkness
Was being replaced by the beautiful whiteness
Then turning into this gorgeous garden
With bright green grass and beautiful colored flowers
Looking up at the sky I saw this beautiful sun
With it’s rays shining down on me, feeling its warmth
I look back at that beautiful girl standing in front of me
Her infectious smile also sends warmth through my body
Giving me this good and uplifting feeling I never felt before
I start to walk towards the girl with the beautiful smile
As I walk closer to her, her smile seems to brighten up
I feel my own smile growing on my face as I got closer
As I stand there and stare at her beautiful smile
I knew this was a beginning of something great
This Girl
There is this girl
A girl like no other
She’s beautiful and funny
She makes me happy when we talk
She’s artistic and a musical genius
She means a whole lot to me
I love her and she loves me too
We are just perfect for each other
We always have something to talk about
Our email conversations are never boring
We love each other with a passion
And I’m sure our relationship in bed
Will be just as passionate
We live very far away from each other
But yet it seems like we are so close
I can’t wait to hold her in my arms
To feel her soft skin against mine
I can’t wait to kiss her delicious lips
To have it press against mine
I just cant wait to be around her
She makes me happier than I have ever been
You know who you are
Me without you is like fish without waterI would die
I love you
A girl like no other
She’s beautiful and funny
She makes me happy when we talk
She’s artistic and a musical genius
She means a whole lot to me
I love her and she loves me too
We are just perfect for each other
We always have something to talk about
Our email conversations are never boring
We love each other with a passion
And I’m sure our relationship in bed
Will be just as passionate
We live very far away from each other
But yet it seems like we are so close
I can’t wait to hold her in my arms
To feel her soft skin against mine
I can’t wait to kiss her delicious lips
To have it press against mine
I just cant wait to be around her
She makes me happier than I have ever been
You know who you are
Me without you is like fish without waterI would die
I love you
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